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Thursday 22 September 2016

This week we rewrite a story about tiny boy that crashed on a plane you can watch the video before u read it.

1  make a plane
2 crashing the plane
3 Leaving

On a Monday evening a boy called Michael made a red and white plastic crop duster but then he kept on failing. He did not no what was going on. Then there was this crystal blue suitcase that smashed his head outta nowhere then a wooden boat looking plane crashed into the tree then Michael got frightened of the tiny girl. He screamed like a cat, the girl got scared, she wielded the pencil and dropped it on the ground.

She tried to push back over her wooden boat plane thing but then  smashed the propeller. The wings got destroyed. The steering wheel fell off too then the girl started crying. The boy had an idea. He put the steering wheel back on and fixed the wings and the propeller. He threw it
then it fell straight to the ground and smashed into smithereens.

You alright? wondered Michael. She shrugged her shoulder and dusted herself off because she was shy and covered in a light brown dust. Then the plane blueprints  flew into Michael's face. Then he had a brilliant idea. He repaired everything with parts off his red and white crop duster and he used the the aircraft plans as a parachute to support him up into the air. As she was leaving he noticed that the boy was not scary and she started to like him. Then SMASH!!!!! Michael heard a loud noise, he started to panic but all it was, was his crop duster falling onto the ground. He saw her soaring into the sky like a hot air balloon floating in the air. Later he saw a  aircraft falling out of the sky. He tried to get a good glance at the wooden and plastic plane. His Dad came over and said out loud, Eah!!! “ What are up to,  we are off home now’’,  but the boy was just day dreaming at night.
He saw all of the stars that the girl put out to give him a signal, but sadly he did not see the signal.  Dad said, “ Hurry up we are off home now, far out!


4 comments:

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  2. Hi Justin it’s Waiheke
    I like your story soar because
    It’s not bad it’s just a lot of words
    but you can more I know you can.

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  3. Hi Justin, My name is Tumanako and I go to Tautoro school
    I like the story soar, It is really cool I liked it.
    Maybe you should have written a little summary about this movie instead of writing all of it.
    Other than that Keep up with the good work and carry on making new things happen.

    Tumanako.

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